email store managerspilot starts Apr 7, 3 storesrollout plan attachedquestions → #acme-partners
Hi all, we’re thrilled to announce that the pilot starts Apr 7 in your three stores. Please find attached I’ve attached the rollout plan. Do not hesitate to reach out. Questions? Post them in #acme-partners.
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Apr 7: your pilot rollout planHi all, the pilot starts Apr 7 in your three stores. I’ve attached the rollout plan. Questions? Post them in #acme-partners.Talk soon
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